Fiction Writing and Other Oddities

Sunday, December 04, 2011

Sample Sunday: The Bricklayer's Helper

It's sample Sunday again! This time, I'm giving you a small taste from my Regency romantic mystery, The Bricklayer's Helper.

What would you do if you were a young girl, orphaned during the early years of the 19th century? Without a family and references, there were pitifully few jobs for women, leaving them to face desperate lives of thievery or prostitution.


Sam faces this terrible situation in The Bricklayer’s Helper.

Her story was based on the actual life of Catherine Wilson, who was orphaned at fourteen and bravely refused to accept the social restrictions of her day. She donned her deceased brother’s clothes to find work under the name of John Thomson.

An orphan like Catherine, Sarah finds herself alone when a suspicious fire burns down her home with her family trapped inside. All she can remember about the horrific event is the warning to “run and hide.” Fighting to stay alive, Sarah cuts her hair, dons the garb of a young boy and obtains a job as a bricklayer’s helper. This disguise allows her to remain safe for nearly thirteen years.

Unfortunately, work takes her to London and a man from her past recognizes her. He arranges a meeting with her, only to be murdered before they can speak. Desperate that she may be vulnerable, Sarah hires an inquiry agent from the Second Sons Inquiry Agency.

However, Sarah is not too sure about the inquiry agent she's assigned. William Trenchard may be competant to fumble his way beneath a lady’s skirt, but can he discover who murdered her family? Despite her doubts, Sarah hires him, hoping to survive long enough to uncover the killer.
Unfortunately, their decisions may prove to be dangerous to their hearts…if not downright fatal.

Book: The Bricklayer’s Helper

In the scene below, Sarah, in her guise as Sam Sanderson, has gone to meet a man from her past, unsure what secrets he will reveal about the fire that destroyed her family.

Excerpt from The Bricklayer’s Helper
 
She glanced around, trying to listen over the pounding of her heart. No one shouted. No one except the major showed any interest in her—other than sheer annoyance when she impeded the smooth flow of foot traffic.


Major Pickering raised his hand, his eyes intent on her face. She took a slow step forward. Then without warning, he stumbled. His hand fell to his side. His gaze wavered. A look of confusion passed over his thin face. Glancing down, he pressed a hand to his side. And as he brought his palm up in front of his face, his legs buckled beneath him. He fell sharply to his knees, and with a shudder, he raised his head. His gaze once more met Sam’s as his mouth worked soundlessly.

A sense of urgency sent her running forward, hand outstretched. Alarmed by the pallor of his face, she tried to reach him to hear the words he uselessly mouthed. Then, although she couldn’t be sure with the jostling men between them, he shook his head slightly in warning. A spasm twisted his features.

Sam stopped and watched in agonized horror as he slowly crumpled, face down, onto the pavement.

A passerby dressed in black bent over him. His quick hands patted the major’s back and sides.

Several men trying to pass turned and exclaimed in surprise.

“What’s wrong?” one said, his voice carrying above the crowd.

“Drunk—”

“No—murder!” another man yelled. “Fetch the constable! This man’s been stabbed!”

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I hope you enjoyed the excerpt!

3 comments:

Caffey said...

Hi Amy! This book is one thats high on my wishlist/shopping list! After having read SMUGGLED ROSE, I'm excited to read more of your historicals! From reading here about BRICKLAYER'S HELPER, your theme is so unique. I've read lots in regency but not much from the early 1900's and about woman working during that time period. I did see a program on one of the channels like Discovery and it was about the working conditions then for woman in the factories etc and as difficult as it was to watch about it, I learned much but so much more to learn and alot I do from reading of my historical romance books. So this being based on a true story inspires me to look up more about the life of Catherine Wilson. I don't do alot because I get carried away and enjoy learning it from the romances I read. This is going to be an emotional read of Sarah's story. And to read that except and leave it hanging like that, I shall be getting it even sooner!! I do have LOVE, THE CRITIC that I got to read of yours on Smashwords! Wow on the excerpt!

Cathie (Caffey)

Amy said...

Thank you so much! I'm so glad to hear from you. We tend to forget how hard it was to survive in the past and not just for women. But when like Catherine Wilson really had a hard time. After she was exposed as a women, she took a job in a factory and you already know what that was like. It's really sad.

I should write up a blog later in the week detailing Catherine's true story. It's got more twists than even mine, although since mine is fiction, I gave my heroine a happy ending.

I actually wanted to steal more things from Catherine's life than I did, but my editor objected to having her marry her landlady's daughter just to avoid exposure as a woman. :)

Thanks again and I hope you enjoy the story. It's a bit of a romp, really.

Amy said...

Thank you so much! I'm so glad to hear from you. We tend to forget how hard it was to survive in the past and not just for women. But when like Catherine Wilson really had a hard time. After she was exposed as a women, she took a job in a factory and you already know what that was like. It's really sad.

I should write up a blog later in the week detailing Catherine's true story. It's got more twists than even mine, although since mine is fiction, I gave my heroine a happy ending.

I actually wanted to steal more things from Catherine's life than I did, but my editor objected to having her marry her landlady's daughter just to avoid exposure as a woman. :)

Thanks again and I hope you enjoy the story. It's a bit of a romp, really.