Fiction Writing and Other Oddities

Monday, June 06, 2011

Guest Author: Donis Casey

I'm pleased to have mystery writer Donis Casey here--I'm a huge fan of historical mysteries and she's created a brilliant series set in Oklahoma during the early years of the 20th century. I can't thank her enough for agreeing to appear here.

Bringing the Past to Life

The Scottish novelist Peter May once wrote that “the purpose of research is to inform you, the writer. So that when you come to write, you do so from a position of knowledge... [and so] your reader can trust that you know what you’re writing about.” I write a historical mystery series set in the 1910s featuring a forty-ish woman named Alafair Tucker, who lives with her husband, Shaw, and their ten children on a prosperous horse farm outside of Boynton, Oklahoma. Being as I have no children, have never lived on a farm, never cooked on a wood stove, washed in a iron tub, or sewed on a treadle sewing machine, much less butchered a hog, I do tremendous amounts of research so that I’ll know what I’m talking about.

But only a very small percent of the research I do for each book finds its way onto the page. I’m not writing a history book, I’m trying to create a world, and it’s amazing how little it takes to add just that perfect touch of authenticity to your story.

Years ago, I went to see Laurie R. King speak at Poisoned Pen Bookstore. She was promoting her stand alone, Touchstone, which takes place shortly after WWI. After her talk, I raised my little hand and asked her how much research she does into her setting and time period before she begins writing, and she replied that she does very little beforehand. Instead, she starts writing, and as she writes she discovers what she doesn’t know, and then looks it up.

I do something similar. For each book, I keep a notebook and file full of information that I read up on as I need it. Much of my research may not be used, for as a book advances, some of the ideas I started out with fall by the wayside. Even so, when the book is finally done, I will have added quite a bit to the huge amount of arcane knowledge rattling around in my head.

Why, then, do I spend so much time learning everything I can about the times, lives, and mores of my characters when I know I’m not going to write about most of it? Because my own familiarity with the era I’m writing about is going to show without my having to make a big deal of it. The characters are going to move naturally through their world without thinking about it, just like we do in our own world.

Alafair ponders a problem while scraping the ashes from the fire box in her kitchen stove before breakfast. She doesn’t think about the history, configuration, or general use of the cast-iron, wood burning stove in rural Oklahoma in 1915. But I do. It isn’t a bit important to the story that the reader knows any of those things either. All she needs to know, or cares about, is that Alafair ponders a problem while scraping the ashes from the fire box. One single sentence in the book represents an hour of research and quite an education in cast iron cook stoves for me that may or may not ever be used again. Yet, isn’t that a picture? One tiny detail triggers a mental image and puts the reader in a country kitchen early one morning in 1915.

You always have to respect your reader’s intelligence. Avid mystery readers are often more savvy about how mystery plots are routinely constructed than the writer is, so you’ve really got to be imaginative and on your toes to fool them. And fool them in a logical way. Same thing with readers who love historical novels. The writer has to be really careful not to make egregious mistakes about the time period - events, language, clothing, tools, conveyances.

It’s a tightrope. An author wants to create as authentic a world as she can, but the whole point is to engage and involve your reader in your story, not to write a history book (or handbook on police procedural, or treatise on forensic psychology.) A novelist should strive to be just accurate enough not to alert the anachronism police.

I have just begun writing my sixth book in the Alafair Tucker series. In the earliest novels, Alafair was only vaguely interested in the events of the time. To a farm wife in the middlest of the middle of the United States in 1914, the war in Europe seemed as far away as the moon. But now, I’m getting to a time period where the affairs of the mighty are intervening on her world whether she likes it or not.

The upcoming book is set here in Arizona, where I live, rather than in Oklahoma, where Alafair lives. So here are the problems I have to solve before I even begin: 1. Why on earth would Alafair go to Arizona in the first place? 2. Once she gets there, what is going on that she could get herself involved in, how, and why? So in order to start to construct my story, I began with a trip to my nearest university library where I read through every issue on microfilm of the Arizona Republican newspaper for late February and early March of 1916, and thanks to interlibrary loan, I did the same for the Muskogee (Oklahoma) Phoenix.

I discovered that in Oklahoma, the end of 1915 and the beginning of 1916 were some of the rainiest months in years, accompanied by severe flooding. Therefore, there was lots of flu and bronchitis going around - enough that it was mentioned in the newspapers. Handily, in the late 1800s through the mid-1900s, Arizona was known as a place where people with chronic lung problems came to let the dry air cure them. Problem number one, solved!

And problem number two? There was a revolution going on in Mexico at the time, as well as the war in Europe. The Mexican Revolution interested the Germans no end, and there were lots of German “military advisers” in Mexico. Even better, in the first three months of 1916, residents of the entire Southwestern U.S. were hysterical over the possibility of a cross-border invasion from Mexico by the Revolutionary Army of Pancho Villa. In fact - and now that almost 100 years have passed, I can be happy about it - in March 1916, the Villistas did exactly that, increasing the hysteria in Arizona to a fever pitch.

For icing on the cake, during the winter of 1915-1916, a major (silent) motion picture, The Yaqui, was being shot in Tempe, the very town in which I set my novel.

If I can’t make a story out of all that, I should have my authorly epaulets ripped off.


Donis Casey is the author of five Alafair Tucker Mysteries,The Old Buzzard Had It Coming, Hornswoggled, The Drop Edge of Yonder, The Sky Took Him, and the just released Crying Blood. Her award-winning series, featuring the sleuthing mother of ten children, is set in Oklahoma during the booming 1910s. Donis lives in Tempe, AZ.


"Crying Blood is a thoroughly engrossing evocation of life on a self-sufficient 1915 Oklahoma farm. In Alafair Tucker, mother of ten, Donis Casey has created a clear-eyed woman of her time... This is my first meeting with Alafair Tucker and her family. It will not be my last.” -- Margaret Maron

Thank you, Donis! I don't know about your other readers, but I (for one) do appreciate the research you do, because I have actually had experience with a wood-burning stove (very messy), washed in an iron tub, and sewed on a treadle sewing machine. Thank goodness those are not regular events in my life, however. LOL Poor Alafair.


Whitewing said...

I know Donis does her research well, because in one of her books she describes the process my grandmother used every week to do her laundry. Described correctly and in great detail. I could smell the soap while reading the scene.


jenny milchman said...

Your series sounds wonderful, Donis. I am very excited to start getting into it. I appreciated hearing Laurie King's words on research, too. Sounds like you both take pains not to let it overwhelm the story no matter what.

Patty said...

Excellent post. I love your series, need to get back to it! The research you do shows, and as a Librarian I love helping people do that research.

Donis Casey said...

Thanks folks. I do indeed do lots or reading, but as Jeff has uncovered, my closely held research secret is that I actually remember my own grandmother doing a lot of the things I write about.

Donis Casey said...

I meant Jeri! Sorry. fingers ran amok.

Irene Bennett Brown said...

Information about how you write your books, Donis, is as entertaining as the novels. And you know how much I love them!

Irene Bennett Brown said...

Information about how you write your books, Donis, is as entertaining as the novels. And you know how much I love them!

Mary E. Trimble said...

You write with authority, Donis. I've enjoyed your work--little did I know you weren't experienced at butchering a hog! Thanks for all the insights.

Eunice Boeve said...

I do lots and lots of research for my historical novels. I get so into the research that it's hard to stop and write the story. Comparatively speaking I use very little of what I've researched, but I never know what will find it's way into the story and what will not. Sometimes something comes into the story I know nothing about, once a pet crow, and I have to stop and resume my research. Your series sounds interesting. I'll have to check them out.

Donis Casey said...

Thanks to Amy for having me and many thanks to all who commented.

Amy said...

You're welcome and I really enjoyed having you as a guest. We got a lot of terrific comments--thanks to everyone!